abhimanyu kumar.s

Gold Star - 12,061 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

I And Rain - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

There was a surprise,
And few promises made.
He did not promise,
But I did it later.

I forgot to tell him,
About the meeting and timings.
Over night and over moon,
I explained it soon.

He covered us in the morning.
I requested his highness,
He accepted our meeting.
And we accepted the day. 

Thala Abhimanyu Kumar

Topic(s) of this poem: love, rain

Form: Blank Verse

Comments about I And Rain by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • (11/24/2011 5:58:00 AM)

    hmm nice imagination on rain good work. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/20/2011 9:00:00 AM)

    sounds very fluent abhi (Report)Reply

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  • (6/28/2011 11:26:00 AM)

    glad he accepted ur meeting...he refuses ours! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, September 2, 2019

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