I Can'T Be For You... Poem by Rudy Hossam

I Can'T Be For You...

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Alone I sit...
Alone I think...
Of everything you made...
Of every word you said...

Could this really be true...
Or am I living an illusion so true...
He said what I dreamed he would say...
I heard it and wished I could stay...

But...My face turned red...
My eyes filled with tears...
How can I tell you...
That I can't be for you...

I know that's what i wanted to hear...
I know that I've been waiting for it for years...
And when u said it...
It sounded so great...
It was better then I ever dreamed...

I never wanted to hurt u with me...
I just wanted to be for you...
But life doesn't always serve your wants...
Life is cruel...
It won't leave me with you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

very beautiful and lovely poem and nice words to go with it

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Akram Awadat 31 December 2008

very beautiful poem nice words go on

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Mohammed Albalushi 14 October 2008

i gree with you(But life doesn't always serve your wants) lovely peom wish you all the best

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Merna Ibrahim 26 June 2009

so touching and so painful....I see an obvious message in this poem and I agree with you in this message that the life is PERFIDIOUS.....well written.Merna Ibrahim.

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Muhammad Ali 05 February 2009

yes. this is life SIMPLY. and just the simplest way to reflect ur thoughts is great. this is a great poem because it is so simple to read so deep invision! ! !

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Samweli Butobi 03 February 2009

emotionally written, love poem, keep up I wanna read more

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Jihad T 16 January 2009

good wording but it seems to me like a letter

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sumaira .....ir 16 January 2009

Wow! True dear lov u for this poem

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Rudy Hossam

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