You Broke My Heart Poem by Rudy Hossam
You Broke My Heart
You broke my heart at last,
I hope that’s what u were looking for,
Everything we shared,
Everything we planed together,
Ended because of someone,
Who doesn’t even deserve.
You acted weird lately,
Like you forgot what we were up to,
Like I was just a dream,
That vanishes when you wake up,
Like you never were for me,
So I never was for you.
I couldn’t understand why,
But you made it,
Pretty obvious last night,
You had someone else in mind.
Who you thought is ready,
To sacrifice everything for you,
Who you thought is willing,
To give away anything for you,
Who you thought will do,
Better than what I did.
But tomorrow the sun will rise,
And you’ll see what you didn’t see,
In that dark night,
That in this whole world,
You’ll find no one,
Who loves you,
As much as I do.
its really good, it shows all the emotions that you went through. you must of really loved that person. almost the same thing happened to me. and i cried so much and i never wanted to see him again.
this poem shows a lot of emotion. very descriptive. i'm sorry you had to go through all of this pain. It hurts to know how easy it is for someone to break your heart when you loved them more than anything.
well i know how you feel... this poem reminds me of a lot of things.. thanks for it..
You're right to blame, he doesn't deserve you. You're like flowing source of sheer thought and sincere love, you can express your feelings easily. Amasing.
looks like you were badly shocked by someone who you loved! ! ! ! foget him dear..don't let any thing break your heart.... even if he didn't deserve you....generally it is a great poem written well.
Milady, I love the simplicity in this.. that makes it so real.. gr8t job.. his lost. ciao milady
Rudy i guess if you tried to rewrite it with rhyme it would be more beautiful dear
A heartfelt piece, sometimes we all get our hearts broken, 10 Lynda xx
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I would like to translate this poem
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i know how it felt...keep on writing