I Can'T Understand Myself..... Poem by Priyanka Shetty

I Can'T Understand Myself.....

Rating: 4.5


I don't care if a hundred eyes look at me,
I wish those two eyes would admire me.

When the day is going great,
I wish that special someone was with me.

When anyone showers me with compliments or sweet words,
I wish that those words were his instead.

A very unknown feeling,
of missing someone when that person is in front of you....

Of a feeling of hope,
Even when life is fun.....

Like a dropp of tear,
in a happy moment.

It's not that i can't live without you,
It's just that I don't want to......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Imogen Lee Greene 28 June 2008

worse than unrequited love or even a unrequited crush, is so much more.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 June 2008

Bold and beatifull! although it comes from pain!

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Chitra - 08 July 2008

a nice poem well expressed

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Tori Haynes 07 July 2008

This is a good poem.... sometimes I just feel that no one loves me. Keep writing your poems, I like it very much

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 29 June 2008

Everyone can live to themselves.But we need the dear ones to share and cherish the dreams.good write.

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Aswathi Nair K 29 June 2008

thanks a lot for sharing what each of us feel..........everyone has this feeling in his/her heart... u've had the courage to speak it out.... keep it up.....(i know i'm none to say that) best wishes...

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Kesav Easwaran 29 June 2008

a feeling known to many of us! good one it is...it must be...write more on your feel, priyanka!

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