I Come Back Poem by Khairul Ahsan

I Come Back

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I feel angry, I feel upset.
I argue, I protest.
I talk loud, I go mute,
Yet I come back,
'Cause you are so cute!

My dreams are distant,
My wishes kept dormant.
My pride is trifled with,
Yet I come back,
Your whims to live with!

The shadow lengthens,
The twilight hastens,
The darkness threatens,
So I come back, and see
How well our bond strengthens!


Dhaka
30 May 2014
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Friday, May 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 24 June 2014

True and sincere love is always strong. It's an emotional poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 January 2019

Thank you, dear poetess Yasmeen Khan, for your kind and thoughtful comment. Much appreciate your reading.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, there is great bond in love, which can make one come back...Beautifully presented and flow of poem very good. Loved reading it.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2019

Thanks for reading my poem, @Geetha Jayakumar. Much inspired by your appreciative comment.

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Aqua Flower 01 February 2019

Steady and loyal! What wonderful traits. A wonderful poem about relationships and how they're not always perfect. Nicely written my friend.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 February 2019

Thanks for your appreciative comment, dear poetess @Aqua Flower. Much inspired by your kind words!

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2014

@Mary Forrester Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. Thanks for understanding the emotions.

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2014

@Amitava Sur Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving a thoughtful comment there. I appreciate!

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2014

@Kirti Sharma, So is your comment, and so do I!

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2014

@Sandra Feldman, Thanks (much belated) for your cute comment!

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