I Converse Myself Poem by Sanjib Das

hey why you do that I dont think its good to do that consult Dr. Hitesh Sheth here he will tell you why as for the construction of the poem its very good -10 anjali

A good expression of the working of mind in silence................I invite you to review my poems if you can.Thank you.

'The silent conversation starts I ask myself some question, I myself reply I present myself as a convict I myself sit on The Judge's chair.' I know this feeling friend! ! ! ! well i ll quote a part of my poem 'The Transformer in the Fanatic's Park' 'Then I transformed to a Magneto* ……… Attacked every shores Filled with Mermaids and housemaids Turned it in to the Forsaken park The loving university Turned to a Pompeii city By my insanity Who am I now? Am I still the Magneto, the crooked one in the wicked park? The lunatic in the fanatic’s park? Am I the Wilson* or Hitler? Aragon* or Caesar? ' this one is about how my university turned to a depressing place, because of my own actions! ! ! ! ..... so i ask these questions everyday my friend... am i the murderer? ... am i the insane mad person? .. i d say these are all legitimate questions indeed.. that's what Barbara Lynn terry who visited my poem said..... it is always good to share one's experience with some one, who is going through the same state..... and you presented it in a very witty, and expressive manner indeed., .. i liked it... 10 well deserved with lots of love shan- i d say look at the devil with love, a and the world will become a heaven.. easier said than done though! ! !

.......Laughing and crying in my mind A play between the sun and the cloud........ nice poem, I feeled it with all my heart............ :)

Very very gr8 poem...a silent conversation within you, I just simply love the way you wrote it. It's something we all do, but you're this is the first poem I've read that convinces me taht you actually have one. Exllente one :) 10/10

and maybe you are a true poet..one of poet's character is to adapt... to make story in his mind so that he can compose an original poem..conversing to his own has a purpose..that is if he is a poet...but if a person does talking and having conversation with his own(i am referring to a literal talking) , well, she/he needs to go to a physician, , but if the conversation happens only in his mind without opening his/her mouth, well that is applicable..everybody are doing that...much more to poets..not only liars are stitching stories, poets too....this statement needs to be cleared..poets are sititching strories so that they can have good poem, it is not a crime...but....but..if a person is (literally) talking while walking..talking while doing anything or he pressumes he has someone to talk with, , , well, that's not the problem of a poet..medical assistance should be made..grace