A Lady In Online Poem by Sanjib Das

A Lady In Online

Rating: 5.0


Everyday I open my computer,
Only to see her.
When, through message, I find her,
Seems to me, she's still near.

I love her beyond measure,
Still she's not my lover.
I want to disclose everything,
She doesn't receive anything.

What happens when I am no more,
She searches me ashore.
I will be standing before the Lethe to cross over,
Will she ever remember?

I remain waiting in Paradise for her,
Surely, she recognises me her true lover.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 03 July 2009

well penned and said well..........

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Anjali Sinha 03 July 2009

wowwwwwwww Sanjib I cant imagine that you can write so well wowwwwwww really beautiful you expressed your sentiments well hope she will understand you before you both reach paradise heehhhhhhh for expressing your sentiments in an appealing way heressssssss a tenner from meeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuuu

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Lady Grace 04 July 2009

this is beautiful..hope she got the message..grace

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Lisa Bray 05 July 2009

this is wow a beautiful piece well put i loved it +10

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Lethe will stay lulled…and stay buried like mummy in mythology Passion can’t be oblivious of…if true Exaltation oozing and ooohing Thanks Sanjib 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Marieta Maglas 21 January 2010

Surely, she recognises me her true lover wonderful confessional poem belonging to lyrism 10/10

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Lady Grace 02 November 2009

uhum....this is a nice piece sanjib...

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Ted M 21 August 2009

I think they use Wi fi in paradise.........joking! What can I say? I see a long list of lovely people already endorsing your write.... Keep up the good work........

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

ohm this is cute and lovely flow of words

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