I Didn'T Like It Poem by Shirley Hanley

I Didn'T Like It

Rating: 4.0


I didn't like it
when I saw you
mirrored within me...

I didn't like it
when my critical mind
recognized your weaknesses
manifest within myself...

passed on through what... DNA...?
perhaps through the theater
of life observed by an innocent mind...?

Oh sweet soul... surrender
to the beauty of divergence

sluff off the shards of life's
magnetic forces drawn to
hater's energy destroying.

9/19/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leonard Dabydeen 03 February 2010

Deep & thoughtful. Thanks for sharing. I didn't like it when I saw you mirrored within me.... This caught me with a smile.... how visionary! ! Bless. Leonard

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Angel OfGod 06 December 2009

Shirley your poems put off a kinetic vibe that slows my thoughts allowing me to ponder deeper on many levels. You have been a kind soul and I value your work. - Jerry

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