Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 90,514 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

I Do - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
Who wants a love like this...
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

I'm fascinated...
By what this could be.
Hold I do close.
I'm so elated...
No imitation.
It is not faded.
It kinda says,
Don't let this go
To my head!

I feel no need...
To feel demanding or greedy.
I am ecstatic,
That this has come to me!

Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

Who? I do.

I'm fascinated...
By what this could be.
Hold I do close.
I'm so elated...
No imitation.
It is not faded.
It kinda says,
Don't let this go
To my head!

I feel no need...
To feel demanding or greedy.
I am ecstatic,
That this has come to me!
Who wants a love like this?
Easy in the giving...
Long lasting to please.


Comments about I Do by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (9/28/2007 9:49:00 PM)

    Saturated dizzyness in the bestest way to soak up long lasting luving! ! ! Well done long may you feel this way.. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 28, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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