I am trying hard to understand
Why God placed us here in such a state
Still I am afraid to reprimand
Him who put me here and tempt my fate
Considering how complex humans are
And how much work it took to get us here
Evolution surely has come far
And yet mortality is always near
I fail to understand what God was thinking
When He made our lives so transient
Did He hope that each of us was linking
To some cosmic heavenly event
How could He commit so great an error
And overrate our sensitivities
Should we all now look up at Him with terror
Or just accept our poor proclivities
Despite my real attempts at introspection
I'll never know just what He had in mind
And so I daily ply the intersection
Of infinity and earthly time
I truly understand these words and often think similar thoughts. Beautiful poem!
So well written, just stunning. God has most certainly blessed you with many, many talents! You need to publish a book of poetry.
An excellent write again Dick. Your poems always flow and rhyme so well. Good work. (I don't know what God was thinking either, but then I am not a believer anyway) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When you figure it out, get back with me. Deep probing intropection in a well packaged, flowing style. In my opinion worth a 10