I Fall Poem by Prabir Gayen

I Fall

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I fall

I fall with rain and flow round
with no orbit,
I am a river with no ocean to meet,
Falling and falling into the ditch.

Friday, August 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 26 August 2019

Excellent poem. Enjoyed it. Thank u, dear friend. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 August 2019

falling rain like falling falling life in the ditch of strife! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2019

Excellent write in utmost brevity. A poetic gem. Onto my Poem List.

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Julia Luber 18 August 2019

I am a river with no ocean to meet: poignant and lonely, but you do this with poetic grace!

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