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I Had To Take It There.

Rating: 2.8

Pawned all of the life I had
And now these hands are bare.
Just a heart I had left- So,
I had to take it there.

Fetched I quite a penny-
For that ugly little guy.
Not a day I pass that shop
Do I find mute its cry.

Tuesday, July 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: regret
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 13 July 2008

Unbelievably clever - you write so well, I can't take it anymore! I will read the next 22 later :)

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Rebekah Gamble 01 July 2008

I like this, it's simple and has a touch of grace, but is powerful and feels almost dirty at the same time. Really nice.

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