I will rape thee-
With my savage love;
Born from the rural pot.
I will rape thee
And while I rot-
I will pray that you do not.
But, I will save thee
You've needs: the sting of me...
And I will rape thee-
Because I know
Only to love and rape thee.
Your poems contain a compressed form of violence. Even love has a certain beastly aspect to it. In this poem, you describe savageness born from a rural pot. I beg to differ on this. A rural pot need not be an uncouth one.
i like it! the desire to rape is a very real thing and i dont think it should be witheld. better on paper than in real life! [3 your amazing!
I'm not sure I know what you mean by the 'rural pot'. I can't imagine it being a compliment to anything rural. Some people just can't stop themselves from walking on thin ice. GW62
i like it. not what im used to but its good. good job.
Tis never nice to glorify rape... having experienced it by two guys about your age...! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Gosh, I can feel the obsession. Whoever the poet is portraying should really get a hold of his emotions or they will rot-in prison.