I Have Heard It Said. - Version # 2 Poem by Michael Hopkins

I Have Heard It Said. - Version # 2

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Version # 2

I have heard it said

Your emotions make you weak

They fuel existence

I Have Heard It Said. - Version # 2
Saturday, September 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,existence,strength,weakness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: I wrote these seven poems a week ago in seven variations of the same theme.If one changes one or more words it can change the meaning yet stay within the same theme.The reader can decide which poem resonates the most with them and tell me in the comment section below which number it was. If you would be so kind?

I have written all seven poems in the haiku style of poetry and published them on my blog for the first time today, the 14th of September,2019.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 15 February 2023

It takes strength to manage one's emotions!

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Michael Hopkins 14 September 2019

Indeed it is Sylvia Frances. I always use the 5-7-5 syllable form of haiku.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2019

Good haiku, but must that not be 5-7-5? As I just wrote: A good haiku. Thank you for sharing, Michael.

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