I Have Heard It Said - Version # 6 Poem by Michael Hopkins

I Have Heard It Said - Version # 6



Version # 6

I have heard it said

Your emotions make you weak

Makes one strong or weak

© 2019 M. N.Hopkins

I Have Heard It Said - Version # 6
Saturday, September 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,strength,weakness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: I wrote these seven poems a week ago in seven variations of the same theme.If one changes one or more words it can change the meaning yet stay within the same theme.The reader can decide which poem resonates the most with them and tell me in the comment section below which number it was. If you would be so kind?

I have written all seven poems in the haiku style of poetry and published them on my blog for the first time today, the 14th of September,2019.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2019

Motions and emotions of love and life! Living on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2019

Not strong OR weak, it must be either strong or weak, one of the two, not both at the same time, makes the meaning be neutral again, kaes the meaning rather weak. Thank you for sharing.

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Michael Hopkins 14 September 2019

In my world it can be. Humanity has both built into the system that the good Lord created.

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