I Have Walked! Poem by Geoff Warden

I Have Walked!

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I have walked these roads,
As have the one before me,
Through rain of storm,
From cloud of sky,
Yet not one drop,
Did touch my skin,
Nor did one dance,
Upon my farrowed brow.

I have walked these streets,
As have the one before me,
Though lonesome and bare,
That none could share,
Yet not a frown shown,
Nor pain have felt,
Upon my weathered face,
O'er my hearts loving grace.

I have walked this path,
As have the one before me,
As sunny days shines,
Infinite strength I find,
Shades my every step,
Holding hand with mine,
Not one beat was missed,
Nor was left from my side..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 October 2006

GEOFF...This is a superior piece of literary verse, possibly your best work, thusfar. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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nn mn 21 October 2006

A great write! BRAVO! 'Upon my farrowed brow.' I was expecting 'furrowed brow' but I like your choice bette.

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The rhythm to this beats, the message is clear. You paint the picture well. It is enjoyable, too. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 15 October 2006

A closeness shared, wonderful expression Thankyou Geoff Love duncan X

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Goldy Locks 11 October 2006

amazing. i loved it. the second verse is so rich in feeling and wisdom. brilliant, G.

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Patricia Gale 11 October 2006

Splendid inspiring piece Sir Geoff.

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