i see you,
but you dont see me.
i hear you,
but you don't hear me.
but you don't listen to me.
Am i invisible to just you?
Or am a illusion.Make believe.
Thank you for reading 'Our Existence is but a Breath'. I have often began conversations with people who actually start having a conversation with someone else. In the middle of the story they often interrupt or begin their own account of events. As if I had gradually become concealed from sight. I know the invisible, I live the illusion. Your thoughts, incredible for one who i believe takes the time to listen. Thank you again and God Bless You.
interesting... is the 'me' the illusion, or are you? could go either way....
Jamine Who is that 'I' Is that the 'Almighty' or your 'mind' Rgds Nooruddeen
no, i do see you so deeply! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I think for me, there was an added layer to this poem. Being half deaf in both ears. I was sympathetic to the 'bad guy'