Invisible Poem by jasmin bell

Invisible



i see you,
but you dont see me.
i hear you,
but you don't hear me.
i listen,
but you don't listen to me.
Am i invisible to just you?
Or am a illusion.Make believe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 16 December 2009

I think for me, there was an added layer to this poem. Being half deaf in both ears. I was sympathetic to the 'bad guy'

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Ghost Writer Insomnis 01 July 2009

Thank you for reading 'Our Existence is but a Breath'. I have often began conversations with people who actually start having a conversation with someone else. In the middle of the story they often interrupt or begin their own account of events. As if I had gradually become concealed from sight. I know the invisible, I live the illusion. Your thoughts, incredible for one who i believe takes the time to listen. Thank you again and God Bless You.

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Sonya Florentino 30 June 2009

interesting... is the 'me' the illusion, or are you? could go either way....

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Nooruddeen Mm 30 June 2009

Jamine Who is that 'I' Is that the 'Almighty' or your 'mind' Rgds Nooruddeen

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no, i do see you so deeply! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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