I Just Imagine You Came To My House, To M. Poem by Liza Sud

I Just Imagine You Came To My House, To M.

I just imagine you came to my house,
and you were sitting at my smalll divan,
and yellow curtains and your blinking glasses,
and Russia - out, Israel - inside.

You sit and smile, you are kind like an angel,
we sit alone and silence is around.
And love is standing, and white light is ranging,
and I give words, which flow, and you - guide.

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Я видела, в мой дом пришел ты в гости,
и ты сел на мой маленький диван,
блестят очки, и занавески жёлты,
Россия - вне, Израиль - внутри нас.

Улыбка, ты сидишь, ты добр, как ангел,
и мы одни, и тишина кругом,
Любовь стоит, и белый свет градаций,
я дарю слово, ты поток - ведешь!

Thursday, October 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 October 2016

Wow this is so beautiful and wonderful! The 1st stanza begins in an extraordinary classic way in poetic wording and description that I found so charming and exotic. Pls do comment my latest poem too called POETRY COMMENTARY EXPOSURE.

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Daniel Brick 14 October 2016

This is absolutely fulfilling, Liza, and it shows that absolute respect for both branches of the Abrahamitic Revelation. It is quiet, confident, full of faith, with not a trace of anything that would trouble the body or soul of one of God's children. No threat or prejudice or accusation, only the opening of hearts and minds to divine grace. This is truly a vision of a modern Eden. We lost the Garden when the Industrial Revolution started changing the Earth God had created. It is a planet of people who are crowding out every other living thing, including each other. If four billion people and more coming can live in peace and and prosperity - THAT WILL BE THE NEW EDEN. So, Liza, your own poem has answered What should We Do with All of these Religions? Can we make them all Christian. And God's answer is: You find a way to live in peace and prosperity without killing each other. Leave the rest to Me. (And if you need help in achieving Peace on Earth, pray for it this Christmas. I will always help your sincere efforts) .

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