I Just Want To Swim Poem by Thomas Case

I Just Want To Swim

Rating: 5.0


She had that
octopus smile,
always reaching for
something.
I was her small
fish; her handmaid.
I lived in her nebulous
world for far too long.
Inky confusion...

There's a reason for
your treason, said the
old man to the shark,
but Hem forgot, a beast
is a beast, they do
beastly things.
We all have to eat.

I'm done being the
meal.
It's your Ocean,
I'm just trying to
swim in it.

You're an oyster,
and I want your
pearl,
but I won't drown
for it.

Wednesday, November 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,selfish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Mitea 24 November 2021

Brilliant work, Thomas!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

A beautiful poem full of metaphors and compelling images. Masterfully woven.

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David Wood 17 November 2021

I was nearly a meal for a shark once, it still raises the hair at the back of my neck, yes it's their ocean we swim in it at our peril. A good 5*

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Thomas Case

Thomas Case

Oxnard, California
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