I Keep On Telling I Am Good Comments

Everybody is born good. Circumstances shape him into bad. Once he understands the tricks of fate, he comes back to good nature. From the cries you make, one can conclude that your mind is benign. Best wishes Andalib.

my appreciation for the rhyme scheme!

A heartfelt plea to find some happiness in this cold world, great write!

nicely penned in rhythmic way.i like the sense of humor refers to Robinhood. cheers~nb

Great poem! That is pretty much me right there. Always having to hind your feelings and keep everything inside, starving for love and affection and freedom but having your heart riped out anyway. Longing for so much more! ! ! Truely enjoyed this piece! ! !

wow! It keep you on, hungry to hear more. good one Asif

Such rhyming verse, twitching every nerve with pain! Great job Asif! !

Nice rhymes..a poem which is different from others, kind of exploring the self. Nice write.