I Keep Trying Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

I Keep Trying



The sparky rays
from my eyes
every time
bounce blinded and wounded
from reaching
You the unreachable.

I'll not cry
never fly
from dying
So keep trying

Sunday, December 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: trying
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
O Poet Me Poety 19 December 2017

ooooooooooooooooo...know me uuu......Kindness sir from this site we must not stir i return with great difficulty poet me poet me

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O Poet Me Poety 19 December 2017

Kindness sir from this site we must not stir i return with great difficulty poet me poet me

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Mihaela Pirjol 18 December 2017

A poem with nice rhythm and rhyme, and a subtle sadness.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 December 2017

Thanks dear poet for your nice comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2017

A beautiful poem.. Thanks for sharing. 10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 December 2017

Thanks sir for nice comment.

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