I Knew.... Comments

Love gone sour moment aptly captured.

Aqua Flower, your minimal rhyming is fine aka very nicely done. I give ***** 5 STARS. : )

And the way you used 'I knew' alone on several lines is 'ideal', I THINK. : )

'sour'............That seems to 'sum it up' pretty well. Yes, the changed title I like better; it fits better for sure.