I Long To Get Lost Poem by Nidhi Agrawal

I Long To Get Lost

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An intense ache,
a longing inside me
Not for a dream or person
but to immerse myself
in the depths of the ocean
To be enveloped by the formless
be carried into the vastness
Let it's weight drown my pain
And never find my way
back to the surface again.

Tuesday, August 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grief ,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 09 August 2017

I reminds me of an old movie song: जा कर कहीं खो जाऊं मैं नींद आए और सो जाऊं मैं दुनिया मुझे ढूंढे मगर मेरा निशां कोई न हो ऐ दिल मुझे ऐसी जगह ले चल जहां कोई न हो

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2017

The mysticism resounding in the poem overwhelms the reader. A philosophy nicely presented. Thanks.

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

Thanks. The song you have chosen exactly matches the poem.

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Rini Shibu 09 August 2017

Poem reflecting your crying heart.. Strong emotions.. ++10 You may like my poem: Deep pain

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

I'm glad you could relate to it rini. Thanks for reading.

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