Just Dust Poem by Nidhi Agrawal

Just Dust

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We're a speck in the universe
Just dust among the stars
But our egos are so vast
They make us who we are
We want to stand alone
Trampling upon all else
Forgetting we are all one
Just dust like all else.

Wednesday, July 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ego ,life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 26 July 2017

We are very insignificant compare to vast universe we are living in. In a sense as you have said we are all equal. With our ego we give identities to ourselves and live separate lives. Nice poem.

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Nidhi Agrawal 26 July 2017

Thanks for reading my poem.

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Plabita Bhaskar 05 August 2017

Indeed our existence is nothing but a vast accumulation dust particles; fragile and vulnerable. Washed by the rain, blown by the storm, yet we endeavour great things, we conquer the great things and that makes us human, so brittle yet so strong. beautiful lines were they. Loved it! !

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Nidhi Agrawal 05 August 2017

Thanks plabita. You've given a very apt description.

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Gurleen Kaur Narang 04 August 2017

I think you are one of the poets whose compositions I read with utter curiosity.Very true words.thanks for sharing.

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Nidhi Agrawal 05 August 2017

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poems gurleen.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 31 July 2017

Just dust, indeed. Yet the human spirit soars. Somehow we have to find a balanced view of ourselves.

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Salini Nair 27 July 2017

our egos are so vast They make us who we are We want to stand alone Trampling upon all else its a truth some times....like it

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Nidhi Agrawal 28 July 2017

Thank you for reading my poem.

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Upendra Upm 26 July 2017

Good comparision caling earth as a dust.

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