Gift From Heaven Poem by Nidhi Agrawal

Gift From Heaven

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The land is drenched with the pouring rain
But empty and dry, my heart remains
No flowers of love kiss the blue sky
Only weeds of solitude have grown up high.
Barren of tender touch of green leaves
A landfill of grief and stifled dreams.
I need to break this wall of fear
Pick up my strength and wipe my tears
For some drops of love to seep through
And fill in the cracks of my life too.
Cleansed of the dust of neglect
I too will dance in the rain
And not let this gift from heaven
Ever fall in vain.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grief ,loss,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2017

Only weeds of solitude have grown up high. Barren of tender touch of green leaves A landfill of grief and stifled dreams. gathering courage and hoping a little bit of love in the creaks of sorrow..... this is a poem of great determination.......i shall not be a pray of my circumstances.. i will become great. very nice poem conveying positive vision to the reader.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 22 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, A beautiful motivational piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 10 September 2017

This gift from heaven - you mean your life? Indeed! Break the wall of fear, pick up your strength, fill in the cracks and dance in the rain. Don't believe other people's definitions of yourself. You know your worth.

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Nidhi Agrawal 10 September 2017

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts Laurie.

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Bharati Nayak 29 August 2017

The land is drenched with the pouring rain But empty and dry, my heart remains No flowers of love kiss the blue sky Only weeds of solitude have grown up high. Barren of tender touch of green leaves A landfill of grief and stifled dreams. I need to break this wall of fear Pick up my strength and wipe my tears-A fine poetic expression of a heart yearning for love.I agree with Zaheer Uddin- You should dance in the rain for such beauty in your words.

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Nidhi Agrawal 29 August 2017

Thank you so much for reading.

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Anamika Raj 28 August 2017

I need to break this wall of fear Pick up my strength and wipe my tears For some drops of love to seep through And fill in the cracks of my life too. Beautiful lines. Your poems are so motivating. I enjoy reading them. Thanks for sharing.10+

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Nidhi Agrawal 29 August 2017

Thank you Anamika for reading and sharing your thoughts.

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Zaheer Uddin 26 August 2017

you should dance in the rain - the poem is absolutely beautiful - - flows really well

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Nidhi Agrawal 26 August 2017

Thank you zaheer

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