I was walking on the roof of my lovely house,
being annoyed of my hysterical spouse,
I saw energy being converted with a flash of light,
a strange human, an amazing sight,
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Marvellous expression and stunning presentation. Musing one............10
One of the greatest gifts we have received is laughter. Sharing it, even with God, is a duty. I enjoyed this poem very much. Where are my alien benefactors? : -)
Wonderful, Like buy one get one free, it was a package deal and you thought it is a single offer..Ha ha ha.... Now a fresh beginning of Nok-Jhok, fresh poetry on Love and romancing, fresh heartaches and fresh headaches......Really enjoyed this humorous poem which made me laugh as well.
Thus you succeeded in making God laugh! Also made Him grant you youthfulness, simultaneously letting your spouse too enjoy the boon of youthfulness! Now both of you can go on another honeymoon!
i'm working on getting this into my/our Oct. showcase now. i forgot to tell you that i love your rhyming, especially house/spouse AND spouse/house! bri :)