I Miss You Poem by Shanice A. Rodriguez

I Miss You



Missing you is like,
The moon without its stars,
Missing you is like,
Peanut butter without jelly,
Missing you is like,
A crab without its shell,
Missing you is like,
The sky without clouds,
Missing you is like,
A rainbow without its colors,
Missing you is like,
A book without its cover,
But me missing you is,
Me without you,
I miss you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 10 August 2012

Great poem with a fantastic ending, God knows how much I'm missing someone just now..thanks for your comment on my poem tittled MY SOUL..

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Ngwa Louis 09 August 2012

Hmmmm could have not been able to understand it but i feel it because i am experiencing it. Very good poem. it is just the song of my heart, i am far from home and i do very much miss my people that is me without them. keep it up

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Pen Anthony 30 July 2012

this last part is awesome/t kinda made me fit in ur shoe...........''But me missing you is, Me without you, I miss you

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