You blinked your eyes
A tide of title is seen
Swaying away from me
Waves of words rising along the tide
Turned back, smiled on your lips
I wrote the first line
You wore a dress for me
I could shape the poem’s body
Whispered my name in your heart
Poem is fallen at your feet
These last lines of the poem are indebted
They are silent as you step in to my heart
I never wrote any Poem
You are really a poetic person.Excellant composition. Just write `on your suppressed lips'. thanks a lot dear HK
PERFECT POEM! ! ! ! ! I really love it, , , <3 well written.. good job..
You wore a dress for me I could shape the poem’s body.......... nice write.......10
that`s the poem, light like a summer cloud and surely has its soul. thanks
well now u have a really good poem here.. outstanding job bravo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow im spellbound -your poem has stolen my heart away it goes to my fav list. I loved it. Really no jokes. A+++and 10+++regards anju