Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

I Recommend - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

You're upset with regrets,
And yet...
You keep them in your weeping.
I think for you the best thing to get,
Is determined to have them ending.

And I recommend...
You open up your door,
With no sentiments to mention...
When you rid them all.

You're upset with regrets,
And yet...
You keep them in your weeping.
I think for you the best thing to get,
Is determined to have them ending.

And I recommend...
When you open up your door,
To rid them all...
Never,
To mention them again.

I recommend...
When you open up your door,
To rid them all...
Not to mention them again.


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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 18, 2012


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