I Said Hello Poem by Sina Farajzadeh

I Said Hello

Rating: ★5.0


I said hello.
She said, 'hi.'
I said I love you!
She said, 'why? '
I said without you I will die!
She said I don't care, you can cry,
Then my heart was broken.
And finally, she said forever Bye!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love's cruel. This poem is not that much difficult. Just as Wordsworth said it was my 'overflow of emotion' and imagination. Best wishes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 26 July 2012

So casual departure! No grief, nothing. Very nice work.Loved this job.

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Kelley Collins 07 July 2014

Love is cruel at times but Honesty is priceless.

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Bing Hua 06 July 2014

Sad, but I like this short poem. It is very nature.

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Heather Wilkins 26 November 2013

short and to he point. this is something that can happen any time. be ware.

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2013

You can pick any words, simple or whatever, still it can be beautiful..what a talent you have! so precious to have one like your talent.._Soul

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Azade J 30 July 2012

I have nothing to say. Your poem was all. with some words you create a wide meaning. best wishes...

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