Shine, Shine

Rating: 4.5
Shine, shine, on the ground - dear Sun,
I'm tired and from suffers no longer I can run,
I need your heat, mercy and light,
For relief no longer I can fight,
Dry my wet tears on the cruel earth,
From depth of my heart, I wish my mom never gave my birth
Shine, shine, on the ground - dear Sun
In the world of suffer, I never had fun.
This the poem for everyone
Even after this, when I am done.
Thursday, August 2, 2012
I am down. Where are the hands to take me up? Please comment. Thanks, Master.
Shanice Rodriguez 22 June 2016
Such emotions in these words of this poem. Great poem
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Neela Nath Das 20 December 2014
A beautiful poem Sina.But the mood of sorrow and suffering has not covered the shining Sun within you.
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Zahra Shariat 13 July 2014
It is full of sorrow, but considering depression and sun light relation and using simple structure are it's advantage.
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Bri Edwards 14 November 2012
change suffer to suffering or sufferings...............your bio speaks of depression. i am very glad poetry has helped you deal with disappointment.
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Nader Baheri 18 August 2012
that's very depressing.very nice written and so meaningful. I do not want to write that everyone has came to this world because of reason. I had or better say have the same soul as you have. As you've said this poem is for everyone. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem.
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Unwritten Soul 11 August 2012
The words budding with the most glowing light, so shed your tears by the sunshine and heart light, this will make you feel better, adopt the bravery and you will keep shine with you every time and every day_Unwritten Soul
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Valerie Dohren 08 August 2012
You are not alone in how you feel, so many feel the same way from time to time. But it will pass I promise you that. Keep writing, see all the beauty that is around you and write about that.
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Elena Sandu 08 August 2012
The more sad a poem is the more I'd keep at heart because you are right this world is of suffer. Beautiful write, thank you!
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Kasia Fedyk 07 August 2012
So beautiful and heartfelt Sina! Shine, shine your beautiful light! Thank you!
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 05 August 2012
always depress and the same title., but good and beautiful.
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