Forgive

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Under rain of words I stand,
Can't even wash my brain or hand,
Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand,
To act bad, to hide truth under sand.

And now all, me, she, we
Are alone, hopeless, can't you see?
Everything's cold, even my tree
Of knowledge which makes me free.

Full with emotins she weeps,
Me too, all we do, no kiss with our lips.
The clothes of wolves are now wore by sheeps
That's why I kill the nights by my sleeps

Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done,
And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done,
But we should have done,
Because you're God, and from Truth we can't run
Because about Judgement told us, your Son.
Sunday, September 9, 2012
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 27 November 2019
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Sina.
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A very creative composition! Keep it up!
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The need for forgiveness is here powerfully presented. Such a universal poem with which we can all identify.
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Shanice Rodriguez 22 June 2016
I like this a lot, especially the first four lines! ! Nice poem
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Howard Savage 20 January 2016
Forgive is the most important element of life. Great poem.
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2015
Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand, To act bad, to hide truth under sand. Full with emotins she weeps, Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done, And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done, and the final prayer God Almighty forgive us. such a penitent plea God will always listen to. thank you for this wonderful prayerful poem on forgiveness. thank you again tony
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Elnaz Mohammadpour 24 August 2015
the feeling which makes me to be in blue is clear in last stanza, its determinism.love the deep emotions.
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Kelly Kurt 05 April 2015
Wonderful, Sina. A pleasure to read. Thank you
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Shirin Parchami 14 November 2012
nice, from the first word you can see emotion not only the words but also the tune of it. good job mate!
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Words' Knight 03 October 2012
sparkling poem, and you are a genius, I loved all your poems, and thank you.
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