Friday, December 30, 2005

I Saw A Girl’s Flirtatious Wink Comments

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The world is drunken daisies
Staggering and singing
Happy songs in the sunlight.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Cj Heck 04 January 2006

You are the last of a dying breed, Uriah - a true romantic man. Very nice poem - good imagery here as well. My warmest regards and respect, CJ

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Joy Vanderhelm 31 December 2005

I loved it, especially the first and last stanzas. I happen to love dancing in the rain at night under moonlight or a streetlight. It's very fun and quite free. Have yourself a time, Uriah.

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Ernestine Northover 31 December 2005

I hope it doesn't rain on you Uriah, but then again, I don't think you would mind if it did somehow! Let you hair down man, and throw yourself into the celebrations. Have a happy time. Love Ernestine XXX

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Amberlee Carter 31 December 2005

' The world is drunken daisies' couldn't have ssid it better myself...excellent work my friend.

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Mary Nagy 30 December 2005

Dancing beneath the streetlights.............sounds very nice Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

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