I See A Girl In The Window Poem by Emily Pearl

I See A Girl In The Window

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I see a girl in the window,
Staring at me,
I could tell something was wrong,
But what could it be.

I see a boy on the pavement,
Looking at me,
Why oh why,
Couldn't I be that Free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Emily, this is as beautiful and well-written as it is thought-provoking. t x

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Dee Daffodil 31 July 2006

Emily...Thank you for letting me know about your poem. I read it and really liked it please see my comments and maybe you can correct me if I have not interpreted your poem correctly. Hope you are doing well. Are you on Summer holidays? Take care, chat soon. Hugs, Dee

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Dee Daffodil 31 July 2006

Emily...are you then staring at your own reflection in the window Emily? I sense a longing for freedom here...but what kind of freedom? Another wonderful piece by such a young, yet wise poet... Hugs, Dee

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Ernestine Northover 30 July 2006

I like this one. Very to the point but very moving as well. A reflection in glass is my interpretation, and the boy someone she prefers to another. I may be totally wrong in my assumption, but if so I apologise. A lot involved in this short poem. Love Ernestine XXX

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