A Star Poem by Emily Pearl

A Star

Rating: 5.0


A star
Shining brightly by the moonlight
Like a flickering spotlight
Like the only one of it's kind
On Earth I feel like a giant
Compared to a star
A star

! A STAR!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 19 June 2006

Stars attract giants eye much better Emily, they are that much closer and get caught in the Star shine. Excellent little Star shaped poem. Smiling at you, Tai

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Duncan Wyllie 19 June 2006

Dear Emily You are a beautiful and gifted daughter, I will always love you and your amazing insight and talents, and the kindness that you show to others is so important Love Daddy! ! ! XXXXXXX

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Stellar. Your Daddy is right; and you have inherited his talent and made it all your own. xxxx

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You are stellar. So is your Daddy. Both of you much beloved here! t x

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Ernestine Northover 23 June 2006

I think it is you that is in the spotlight now Emily. A sweet poem and I agree one does feel like a giant when one looks up and see just a little tiny star winking at you. A lovely poem. You should be very proud of yourself. Lots of applause. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Dee Daffodil 23 June 2006

Emily...this is a lovely poem...you are a star! ! Terrific poem for someone so young! Dee

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Scarlett Treat 22 June 2006

And a star you will continue to be if you do this well on your writing.. Well done, Young Lady Emily, well done.

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Mary Nagy 22 June 2006

A lovely look at something we all see.....no matter where we are in the world. The stars are often a point of fascination for me. Another great poem Emily! For 9 years old, you have an enormous amount of talent.....proving once again that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree heh Duncan? I will surely watch for more from this budding poet! Sincerely, Mary

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