Gigantic Space

I like this Pearl, it flows very well and is an ideal narrative for a poem. The only problem I can see in it is the line about being free as a bird. All other descriptions use an abstract measurement and bird is not only cliche but doesn't fit in.

A poem of a talented and enquiring mind will fathom out the why and wherefores Emily. A nice little thought provoking poem. It kind of makes us feel so small don't you think? Good work, Smiling at you, Tai

hi emily those r two pretty poems keep going! !

Gigantic is the right word for this one Emily. This is really a lovely read, and a lovely write too. You have explained the universe so clearly, and we all wonder what is beyond space. Beautifully expressed. Welcome to Poemhunter nice to have you with us. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Emily, you are very sharp. Challenging yourself and asking questions...awesome! We're all very proud of you here at poemhunter. Here's a challenge Emily...can you write a poem about...smiles? Dee

Hello Emily, you are as talented as your Daddy, and your poem is lovely, as is your name. Have fun writing, and enjoy your childhood, you wonderful child.

Good Morning Emily Pearl, im Slim. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your Daddy has real competition from you. I will look out for your poems in the future, wish i was able to use words as you have, when i was 9. I dont know if Daddy has told you, but when you are 9 years old, you get extra Ice Cream and Sweeties every time you write a new Poem! Enjoy your writing. Slim.

A wonderful poem Emily Pearl (I LOVE your name!) This sounds very much like the questions my 10 year old son raises. This is a real winner! ~ Great job! Sincerely, Mary

And a Gigantic mind; and when even more Space comes to be, you'll be knocking out everyone else on this site with one stroke of the pen.

An awesome poem full of brilliance from a very inspiring and creative mind Emily you are a treasure for sure Love Daddy XXXXXXX