audrey perez

Rookie (may 25 / del valle texas)

I Seem To Be, But Really Am - Poem by audrey perez

i seem to be happy
but i really am sad
i seem to be laughing
but i really am holding back the tears
i seem to be free
but i really am locked in a cage
i seem to be glad
but i really dont understand
i seem to be annoyed
but i really am tired of being treated like a toy
i seem to be a lion
but i really am a fish
i seem to be liveing life
but i really am liveing in dispite
i seem to be a bully
but i really scared of being ran over
i seem to be head high
but i really am underneath my shoulders
i seem to be a child that dont understand
but i really am a woman that understands what she has


Comments about I Seem To Be, But Really Am by audrey perez

  • (5/6/2011 8:50:00 PM)


    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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