Nicole Holloway


I Slept With Nicole And All I Got Was This Song Written About Me - Poem by Nicole Holloway

I'm in a daze
Everything seems so quick
I met you just two weeks ago
Yet I find myself
Naked in your bed

Your blue eyes hyponotised me
I didn't have control over myself
it all seems like a dream
Yet I can feel every touch
You put upon me

This 'thing' that we have
is it love?
Or is it just you wanting
a path into my bedroom

I can't seem to snap out of it
Tender kisses, hot touches
It seems so unreal
But it is
And I can't seem to grip reality
I feel like I'm slipping away

I may be in a confusion
But I'm not blind
I see you staring
At other girls as they walk by us

I guess it isn't love
Only your hormones
I guess I'm just another girl on your list
that you 'banged'

I can only blame myself for getting attached

I actually thought you cared about me


Comments about I Slept With Nicole And All I Got Was This Song Written About Me by Nicole Holloway

  • (11/28/2005 8:58:00 AM)

    i dont rly get the part of the title, 'And all i got was this song written about me' but then again, im slow, good poem tho, ohh nvm i get it now, lol, like i sid b4 im kinda slow, the title is creative and long but rly cool, awesome poem, u r rly a good writer, never give it up
    Cara
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  • (11/17/2005 6:44:00 AM)

    : -D

    OMG, this is REALLY good! ! ! !
    As said before, pure, raw emotion, stuff like that cannot be made up, it has to come from the heart, i'm sure that lots of people have been in that situation, and can readily identify with it. I know i can. Wonderful.

    And, just for the record, you deserve better than that xxx
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  • (11/8/2005 12:35:00 PM)

    The title of this poem drew my attention immediately, it's perfect (even though I usually prefer shorter titles. You could always give it a really stinging subtitle though.) I remember feeling just like this many times when I was younger. A really good poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2005 2:07:00 PM)

    Hey, i really like thsi poem, its true raw emotion - i know how you feel, you get carried away with a boy because you yearn for him to actually truly care, and the attention sexual stuff gives you is flattering...but then you get tossed aside, and you know in your heart of hearts that the person doesnt rly care. and its so sad when you realize..but, just to let you know, you'll find someone who truly does care, i promise u! ! hope you feel happier soon! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 7, 2005



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