your eyes have burned the time to filigree.
Nothing is left of light's necessity.
Silence has interlocked us both in lace.
Great trees are fighting darkness for their space.
Eternal whiteness decorates the grass.
Leaves skim distance like ornaments of glass.
Is there a moon for such a heavy sky?
I think light breaks somewhere without a cry.
Absolutely fabulous, I agree with Mary, your poems are amazing to say the least. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem as I do all your poems that I have read. I doubt that you would have one I didn't enjoy. Thankyou Sandra--Melvina--
I love this poem and your poems in general. It's like other dimensions of life are unveiled. 'Leaves skim distance like ornaments of glass, ' sets off powerful and stunning images in my mind. A beautiful, beautiful poem!
A truly visual poem with such subtle yet vivid imagery. Loved it. Warm wishes, Justine.
lovely but so far you have restricted yourself much to the field.
I think light breaks somewhere without a cry. This is a masterpiece line from your poem. Touched me.
Exquisite. Enlightened. Excellent. Words that suit your poetry the best, in my opinion. I often have a certain association brought by your poem: in this case it is the melody of Ennio Morriccone 'Chi Mai', poignant yet undescribably beautiful.Thanks for sharing.10+.... Amary.
Hello, Sandra! Many thanks for your images of sensitivity, quietness, musicality. How profound it is for me this last line: 'I think light breaks somewhere without a cry.' I believe your poems spread light for good! Love, Maria
The remarkable lyrics... Insists to calmness... 10.... With love, Tsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yup! Lovely as usual. Bill Grace