I Wanna Slip Back Poem by Neela Nath Das

I Wanna Slip Back

Rating: 5.0


I wanted to bloom
in the lap of green.
Intolerable it is to
stay as unseen!

I lift up my head
and cast my look.
I see the glum shade,
thru the mirror of brook.

No longer, I stay there,
where joys I lack.
To sleep, in the deep,
I wanna slip back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 13 February 2014

Lovely lines with a handful of hopes who are getting hindered. Sleep - you sleep my dear with lots of nice dreams..... loved it

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 February 2014

such a sweet drop! ! loved it.

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Neela Nath Das 07 February 2014

Thanks friends for leaving inspiring comments.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 February 2014

Beautiful poem Neela. Beautiful way you have compared nature to life. This poem left me wondered... Where I wanna slip back Is it to the lap of green earth, which is full of joy... or looking for joy thru the mirror of brook....Loved reading..

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Savita Tyagi 06 February 2014

Wonderful! Beauty with great depth. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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