I Want To Know Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

I Want To Know

Rating: 5.0


Show me your scars
Let me trace my fingers on them
Let me feel its roughness beneath my touch
I want to know if it still hurt
If the pain still linger
If the wounds have completely healed

I want to know if you can trust again
If you are strong enough to take another risk
If you are brave enough to take another chance at life
If you are still the same person
Despite having been wounded by life

Sunday, August 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,wound
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2022

A great poem.... appreciated the philosophical undertone...top score dear poetess. Stay blessed!

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Genova Maaa 22 October 2017

your touch, , , , , , , , wounds........ scars......... ur vision and curiosity.. to say i want to know...if u are still the same person........ even after getting wounded........... thank u dear poetess for fine thinking and ur desire and vision .. thank u again. genova

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2017

Let me trace fingers on scars if these are shown to me. Let me feel roughness and let me try to heal these. If you are same person let me feel life to remove pain. Amazingly drafted poem is shared here...10

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Dev Anand 22 August 2017

I want to know if you can trust again If you are strong enough to take another risk....... a great call to take challenges again inspite of hurts.... love this poem of determination and command.. love it. dev

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