I Want You To Feel Me Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha
I Want You To Feel Me
It’s a sleepless lonely night
I can’t stop thinking of you
If only you knew
How much I love you
Cold winds blowing around
I’m still awake
Out on the streets
Wandering willy-nilly
Chilled to the bone
Abandoned and alone
It’s a shivering dark night
But can’t freeze my feelings for you
If only you knew
How much I miss you
Up above the frosty sky
I see the sinking moon
Behind the clouds
Braving the winds
The moon resembled me
Desperate and deserted she
It’s a quiet empty night
But I can’t get hold of the silence
If only you knew
How much I need you
Memories keep floating back
I feel you in my heart
Entwined ten fingers
Scream in prayer
Sudden glitter of fireflies
Start making loud cries
I wonder,
If silence has ever been this loud
If night has ever been this empty
If life has ever been this illusive
Oh, my sweetheart!
I am in pain tonight
The sinking moon feels it
The freezing cold feels it
The vanishing cloud feels it
The dying star feels it
But when will you feel me?
A heartfelt poem crafted with skill and bringing intense emotions to the fore make for a stunning write. The last stanza is particularly heartfelt and I commend you for exposing your feelings and bringing the reader right into your piece. 10 Karin Anderson
I enjoyed your love poem. Each word, each line seemed to come straight from the heart. In time you will heal, but keep on writing. A very good pliece. Lynn
pensive, contemplative...and then the burst of fullness bringing the message home... Wonderful build up and release. Well done.
at times we wonder to our loneliness- the feeling of in-tense drama of life. and that is meant to be part of our maturity in loving. nice poem that denotes the ongingness of love and its contrast as the letting go inorder to fill the love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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well, this is so lovely piece of poetry romantic plus vivd ideas are there inside well penend at all luwi