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Unconditional Love

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Whenever I’m in need,
you always stood by me
In the times of trouble,
during the moments of despair
You say, you’re my shadow,
that you will follow me forever

I love you so much,
but I hate shadows
Shadow grows and shrinks,

with fading light
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Mohammed Albalushi 16 August 2009

Love that comes with a reason, may vanish with changing season, true i agree with you, lovely poem dear Deependra, wish you all the best

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Luwi Habte 16 August 2009

nice poem well penned and sounds good as well Luwi

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 August 2009

Good poem. First she says she would be your shadow. But dont want that! And go on defining a shadow and you want her to be for ever on your side. Very good thought, well composed.

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Surya . 16 August 2009

love with out condition sure works and satisfies one, s inner feelings.nice write voted10 surys

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

Lovely piece my friend....they who share the same value of what a heart gives to us all...Love......and the greatest of lifes feeling....beautiful work Deependra 10

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Cherish every moment of togetherness, and love without condition Rachel Ann Butler

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Seema Chowdhury 23 August 2009

i hope your heart's voice reaches the heart of the one you are trying to get to. good luck, nice poem.

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2009

enchanting poem....well expressed emotion and written well....

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Obinna Eruchie 17 August 2009

A wonderful and a distinct way of penning a love poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 August 2009

Love that just accompanIes may leave at one time or other in life...love that gets immersed into, will never make a shadow through out your life journey...two different perspectives of love there...good work...thanks...10...

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