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I like this for the feel of sleeping in the grass.....I love that. I think this is still wonderful. I do like this ending better, although she could have joined you? ? Nice Uriah. Sincerely, mary

should not giving up so easily.

A very good poem, Uriah. It sets the stage for the lovely twist/hook at the end. You are far too young, to be thinking such thoughts, though. 10 from me. Hugh

Simply lovely, Uriah. I've been looking forward to reading something new from you, and as expected you did not disappoint. Shannon xoxo

You can't always win Uriah, but at least the ignition was still switched on. Love Errnestine XXX

Uriah...painfully honest without whining. I liked the matter-of-fact tone.

you really don't know how amazing you are, do you? to anyone else, such a moment probably would of went unnoticed, but you've seen it for it is: a poem...well done.