I Watched Poem by Ben Partenay

I Watched

Rating: 3.5


the night fall
silent like a
broken shadow
gone headlong
into dream

i watched you
twitch and shiver
with my touch,
saw the light go
on in
your eyes,

wanted to
be the spark
that set
the sun on fire.
the dream that
wakes you hot
like a
summer fever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2014

Loved reading your poem. It is power packed with passion. The last stanza ignites a spark!

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Morawn Higgs 21 December 2013

Very sensual. I liked it. Thanks for the comment (on one of my poems) , by the way.

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