Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 390,136 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Will Descend - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Whenever evils exceed their limit or raised head
I have descended on earth to eliminate lead
This cycle will be repeated at regular interval
People too will know exactly upon my arrival

Heavenly objects have witnessed my presence
Definitely there was purpose and some sense
I have to guide and control the whole universe
I can't wait for particular time or moments very tense

Excess of everything is not acceptable and very bad
Nothing can be tolerated and its result can be so sad
Nature too may not take it light or leniently
World has observed and witnessed its wrath recently

Things can be stretched to its maximum limit
Time comes when one has to relent and submit
Many warning signals are sent in advance
One must have common sense to have glance

Have you ever thought why it makes you to dismay?
Why sun is beaming sharp with hot rays?
Why sea is raising alarmingly at high level?
In fact no place is safe for us to go out and travel

I have descended in past in different parts of world
Whether it was desert, mountain or regions very cold
I have watched the scene where miseries were untold
No conscience, no moral or even soul was sold

Massacre, loot, plunder and rape are new scenes
Immoral acts are order of the day it seems
Nobody is ashamed or repentant of their act
How to witness or tolerate such scenes and react?

They are sealing their own fate and digging the grave
All acts in their eyes are bold and brave
But mind it nobody would come to their rescue
They have to undergo punishment which is due

I would still have the love for human being
There may be poor, rich, chieftains or king
I care for all or even for smallest creature
I am always tolerant and have mild nature


Truth and only truth will prevail
All immoral acts may miserably fail
Nothing will be easy for them to sail
They may not be left with time to avail

Carve out your way in reasonable manner
Chances are getting very thinner and thinner
No one will point you out for any act
This is simple logic and known fact

I shall have to act to get rid off the evils
They will be crushed under the heavy wheels
Nature and ocean may rise to the occasion
I shall free the people in any place or region


Comments about I Will Descend by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (7/15/2010 11:00:00 PM)


    Whenever evils exceed their limit or raised head
    I have descended on earth to eliminate lead
    This cycle will be repeated at regular interval....... it is reasonably true to words....10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/8/2010 11:42:00 PM)


    Whenever evils exceed their limit or raised head
    I have descended on earth to eliminate lead
    This cycle will be repeated at regular interval
    People too will know exactly upon my arrival
    ......general belief....10
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  • (12/29/2009 6:42:00 AM)


    Excess of everything is not acceptable and bad
    Nothing can be tolerated and its result can be sad
    Nature too may not take it light and leniently.yaGodhasto descednd to removemany ills of the society.........beautiful thought
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  • Louis Rams (12/29/2009 12:14:00 AM)


    YOU ALWAYS KNOW HOW TO TOUCH TOPICS IN SUCH A WAY THAT YOU CARRY THE READER WITH YOU. GR88888888T (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 5:35:00 PM)


    this piece is nicely done..it is visible that matured people submit smart poems..it rhymes and the thought has great impacts to adults..we can get lessons out of this poem...dear, i like this poem of urs..hope ur fine..lav ya...smileeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 9:12:00 PM)


    i will be honest...it bored me you're words are not what you feel and they have no power to me i didn't care for it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 22, 2010


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