I will touch you as
breeze touches the tender leaves
or water touches a shoal of fish
I will touch you as
Zephyr touches the nubile flowers
or sunlight touches the cloud’s showers
I will touch you as
Morn sun touches, new sprung grass
or silky hair touches a face of lass
I will touch you as
Mother touches her newborn child
or sunlight touches the dew mild.
I will touch you as
Bard touches his inspired words
or tress nestle the chirpy birds
I will touch you as
Wind touches the dancing flame
or lovers touch her lovely dame
I will touch you as
Love touches the lover’s heart
or Artist touches his piece of art.
I will touch you as
Divine grace touche its devotee
or Rivers touch her beloved sea.
I will touch you………………
ANJALI
30-12-2008
superb poetic material there amazed an impressed at a loss o words.. cheers
I will touch you as breeze touches the tender leaves or water touches a shoal of fish hmmm a very perfect poem done in the flow of poetic melody... like it very much..the ideas is rich and brain feeling... great poetry... really I mean it..
ya touching with grace that all matters. we hold the same views differently. i have written 'Touc me not' i rate this as 10
And when is that going to happen with your latin love...French-like slurred speeches......I like the subject of 'I will touch you' Or is it like this -' WETTE PAINTE_ TOUCHE NOTTE'.....connoting a budding love yet to go a long way or it is just as wet as a drenched cat to dry up before mewing the sounds of love.
Oh this is good! Great bit of writing with lovely imagery and smooth flowing words. Well done!
TOUCH! TOUCH! ! TOUCH! ! ! All touches have become a ‘Touch-Stone’ I’m feeling tone and tune of ‘Touch-Stone’. Lithe and nubile Ten++ dr. sakti Thanks for comments and rating and expecting the same on my poems if you please.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks...for touching me... Cheers. Subroto