I Wish That You Were Old And Withered(For Junie) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

I Wish That You Were Old And Withered(For Junie)

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I wish that you were old and weathered
that wrinkles irrigated your face
that your hair was a halo of white
that your bones ached
and that you complained
with coughs and curses
about your great old age


rather than
Death held you
young & forever
locked in the center
of his ageless eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 21 July 2008

And so, I collect antiques...not the flashy new but the treasured old, lovingly cared for for a lifetime...and so I wish Junie could be for you...lovingly cared for for a lifetime, not always remembered as fresh and new. Scarlett

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Onelia Avelar 19 July 2008

And the end is unexpected and brilliant!

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Onelia Avelar 19 July 2008

Nice old treasures brought by the rising tide by the ocean of your poems. This one is so passionate... I like it very much. You make something old to look more precious. You are a poet in heart, Donall, no doubts!

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Lucianne Fasolo 21 October 2007

Your endings are always unexpected, : P Great poem.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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