I Wish You Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Wish You

Rating: 4.4


I wish you could be there before I land
Offer me passionate care with helping hand
We lived on land with love and firm stand
Not as an ideal couple but as real friend

We were two sides of the same coin
You were sweet and appealing tune on violin
May hands freely moved with quite ease
How can the sweet memory simply erase?

You cared for everything in submission
Not slight oh! With pain in admission
You had your own way of dealing
Your fingers moved with magic healing

I could sustain odds and immense shock
You stood behind me as solid rock
It was tremendous boost for me to strike
I could tackle the friends or foes alike

I lived on earth with magic spell
Life was proving tough as living hell
You always prayed for my well being
I was ordinary but you saw me as majestic king

I could not deliver as was expected
Not happiness but sorrow and pain collected
What would have been otherwise a complete failure?
You made the life fully safe and secure

I prayed God to give you enough courage
Enough strength to stand firm and manage
When I leave this land for heavenly abode?
Leaving behind sobbing friends in shocks

I had banked upon you with great trust
I knew it was pure necessity and must
What one can expect at departure point?
Everything was left behind just to disappoint

We can’t we have freedom to travel as co passenger?
Why are left in helplessness and in anger?
We have sailed in the same boat for holy mission
Why not have access as pair for submission

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chand Shikari 15 July 2010

I wish you could be there before I land Offer me passionate care with helping hand We lived on land with love and firm stand Not as an ideal couple but as real friend.. sign of ideal living by coupls....10

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Louis Rams 24 January 2010

one was the strong link while the other was weak, and the faith they shared reached its peak. the fist verse had said it all. good write a ten

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Yacov Mitchenko 16 January 2010

It sounds here as if you have a very good friendship with someone. Notwithstanding our failures and weaknesses, true friends are behind us, and they often see the sun where others only see the snake in us. However, toward the end of the poem - I may be mistaken - it seems you experience some falling out with that friend, and some anger remains. Perhaps there's a conflict of interests. I'm not sure, due to the awkward diction and grammar. I wouldn't mind a little clarification. Anyway, if time allows please read some of these: 1. Beyond Loneliness (Page 1) 2. Communion With Pain (Page 2) 3. First Snowfall (Page 2) 4. God and Loneliness (Page 2) 5. The More and Emptiness (Page 7) 6. Myth of Muslim Extremists in Jim Fractured (Page 6) 7. You (Page 8) 8. You Gave Me Back To Myself (Page 8) 9. You Sit, Face Averted (Page 8)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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