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I Write This Poem



i write this poem
to say im sorry
if i haven't won
just pardon me

i was so pretentious
and proud so much
while i am ridiculous
more than a man can watch

i want to say this to you
that i become so unconcerned
though i forgot to feel it too
that you are just for lend

i write this poem
to say again
seeing you soon
is what i wish to happen

[madero, Naga City
18august2011]

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tnx for the comments...i am honored

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2011

great thoughts, a very well expressed emotion, nice piece

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sweet, .. felt it..genuine expression of undeniable feelings. keep em coming.. thanks for sharing. :)

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